My video on Youtube

So, what do you think of my video?
I downloaded a FE guy's video, who is also a bible thumper, I made commentaries on it as to what mistakes he is making and reuploaded to my channel.

The channel is open. You can rate it, You can comment on it.
The original guy blocked comments and ratings and that pisses my off.
Are my textual comments alright?
Are they long enough in terms of seconds?
Is what I wrote factually correct?
Is there something that I missed?

So, what do you think of my video?
I downloaded a FE guy's video, who is also a bible thumper, I made commentaries on it as to what mistakes he is making and reuploaded to my channel.

The channel is open. You can rate it, You can comment on it.
The original guy blocked comments and ratings and that pisses my off.
Are my textual comments alright?
Are they long enough in terms of seconds?
Is what I wrote factually correct?
Is there something that I missed?

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Your first claim the Sun and Moon should always be visible is demonstrably false.

Your first claim the Sun and Moon should always be visible is demonstrably false.

You should watch the video completely as to what leads FE people to state that the Sun and Moon are like projectors with a cone on them.

Of course, the projector with a cone thing is not something that is observed. Also, the sun, moon, etc dive into the horizon or go up from the horizon. So, that part of the FE model is something that I have not understood.

random, disjointed, bifurcated,
ambiguous, pointless, confused,
amateur, pointless, waste of time.

C+ if it was a 7th grade project.