Hey getrealzommb. I am sorry I did not respond sooner, but until today, I had only listened to these on my phone using the built in speaker and did not want to give any criticism based on that. Today, though, I listened on the built in speaker on my laptop, and it sounds much better. I will download the songs so I can hear them on a real system, but for now, the only constructive criticism I could possibly think of to say is that, while the vocals and instruments and musicians sound great, I can't help shaking the feeling that I have heard these before. Don't get me wrong, I could not have recorded anything even approaching this. I just feel, and I could be wrong, that possibly there is a lot of influence from other songs in play here. Maybe it is just the retro vibe from the song, and maybe I am just shit at music.
Anyway, I am going to download and listen to your songs so I can hear them the way they should sound, including the one you PMed me. I will give you are better assessment when I am done. Also, you asked for constructive criticism, so don't get mad at me. I think you are doing a great job.