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The Lounge / what do you think of this?
« on: May 09, 2006, 11:07:50 AM »
right i just wrote a short story for english, and i have to write another, the subject of my story is evil and i will post the one on good i have to write when i finish, i just want a couple of opinions.
Evil
The dull clashing of steel, as the beast moved through what many people once called home another road collapsed under the weight of evil upon it. The creature left footprints of molten flame in its wake tainting the sky to a dull grey, the thing was 16 feet tall, wherever it stepped tremors followed. The creature let out and almighty cry, another and another responded before long there were dozens of responses so great was the noise huge rents in the earths crust opened in what was once called London. There was a smash as a creature destroyed St. Paul’s cathedral while the few remaining citizens fled away in terror.
thanks
-squeaker
Evil
The dull clashing of steel, as the beast moved through what many people once called home another road collapsed under the weight of evil upon it. The creature left footprints of molten flame in its wake tainting the sky to a dull grey, the thing was 16 feet tall, wherever it stepped tremors followed. The creature let out and almighty cry, another and another responded before long there were dozens of responses so great was the noise huge rents in the earths crust opened in what was once called London. There was a smash as a creature destroyed St. Paul’s cathedral while the few remaining citizens fled away in terror.
thanks
-squeaker